First comic posted here, hope you all like it!

Check me out on bluesky too!

  • @Krauerking@lemy.lol
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    83 months ago

    Woah that’s unreadable.

    Give me at least a drop shadow or outline or something. Bold putting white text on yellow and orange backgrounds at 12pt font.

    • @CurlyChopz@lemmy.worldOP
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      43 months ago

      Yeah I messed up, I edited it zoomed in and forgot to check what It was like zoomed out (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻)

      • @JayDee@lemmy.sdf.org
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        53 months ago

        It happens. It’s always a learning process. Then you get the flow and things start flyin out good quality.

        • @Doubleohdonut@lemmy.ca
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          13 months ago

          Literally stopped to read the comic because of this thread. It seems promising @curlychopz! I hope you keep posting!

  • @cybirdman@lemmy.ca
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    213 months ago

    I really love the hand drawn style and the characters, but you should really try to make the text more readable. It is very hard to read unless you zoom up close with the HD on (am on mobile). Keep it up though would love to see more of this

    • @CurlyChopz@lemmy.worldOP
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      43 months ago

      Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback! Yeah, I really messed up with the text here lol. I’ll get another one out and I’ll actually take the text into consideration a bit more lol