• @[email protected]
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    4813 days ago

    I can see the intention of the story, but how you wouldn’t notice many windows on a small hut when you approached makes it not work for me.

    • LostXOROP
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      1513 days ago

      Maybe there’s none on the side of the hut Anon approaches from?

    • @[email protected]
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      412 days ago

      Also the lighting. If it’s dark outside how do you light up a person looking into a window in a way they appear as a painting instead of weird shadows.